TLC by Chrouya Script: Suisei 01 [main] Workraw: Suisei_01[WR] 33 {\i1}No change in adrenalin production.{\i0} {\i1}No change in adrenaline production.{\i0} {consistency with line 18} 52 {\i1}As soon as the Telemothy \NSwing is complete we launch.{\i0} {\i1}As soon as the Telemothy \NSwing is complete, we launch.{\i0} {felt like a comma was missing} 53 {\i1}Good luck.{\i0} {\i1}Godspeed.{\i0} {the context feels way more like this word.} 216 {\i1}Revival was successful.{\i0} {\i1}Resuscitation successful.{\i0} {just recommendations} 218 {\i1}I protected your biological \Nfunctions via cold sleep.{\i0} {\i1}I protected your biological \Nfunctions via artificial hibernation.{\i0} {alternatives} 219 {idem}